"Fire Angels" is a well-crafted and well-honed story. It is a fantastic first novel for author Richardson and a surprising gem for the reader. -- Bookreviews.com
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David Cooper sat on the back steps of
the small Florida
farmhouse as the sky slowly faded from gold and red to purple. He had been
there ever since the sheriff and his deputies finished their work and took away
the body. Minutes? Hours? He wasn't sure. He kept retracing the day in his
mind, a bright, quiet Sunday that evolved into an afternoon of confrontation,
horror and death. He stared at the dark stain on the ground. It was the kind of
stain that he saw so many times when he was fighting in France in the
big war--bright red that dried brown. The kind of stain he had hoped to never
see again.
As the daylight faded he slowly rose
and stepped down into the yard, broke a branch from a shrub, and used it to
sweep sand over the spot.
The coal oil lamp cast a soft glow
through the window and the screen door into the kitchen. Sara Cooper appeared
as a silhouette at the door.
"David," she called softly,
"please come in for supper. You need to eat."
As he walked into the kitchen with its
familiar look and aromas, he thought back over the years that brought the
Cooper family to this day.
Chapter 1
January, 1917
The wind had started with a nervous whisper from the
northeast in the early afternoon, bringing with it a patina of ash gray cloud
that stayed until evening while the winds built to a constant keen that sliced
through cracks in the clapboard siding and rattled windows on the windward side
of the small Florida farmhouse. Sheets
had been hung over bedroom windows in a feeble attempt to shield from the cold
the young woman whose cries of childbirth seemed to echo the shrieks that
buffeted the cottage. The bed was piled
high with homemade patchwork quilts of myriad faded colors and the door to the
front room was propped open to admit some warmth from the crackling fire in the
stone fireplace.
David Cooper stabbed at the fire with a length of iron rod,
placed the rod quietly on the hearth, pulled his watch from the bib pocket of
his overalls and pressed the catch to release the tarnished gold-toned cover.
He held it tilted so that the fire would light its face. Only seven minutes
from the last time he had checked, 1:36 a.m.
He wiped his face and smoothed his red hair with a rough, work-stained
hand and rested his head against his forearms braced against the mantle. How much longer could it be? The baby was
coming two weeks earlier than the date Doctor Wallis had calculated, and with
little warning. It seemed that Sara was
fine one minute and doubled with pain the next. That had been nearly five hours
ago.
The doctor had told David and Sara about false labor, but
they both knew after a few minutes that the wracking pains heralded the
imminent birth of their
first child. When Sara's water broke David made her as comfortable and as warm
as possible, banked the fire in the fireplace, and ran more than a mile to the
Harris's small farm to fetch Cora who served as midwife for any family needing
her help--black or white.
David paced in front of the fireplace, stepping lightly,
conscious of the noise
his heavy work shoes could make on the bare
wooden floor, not
wanting to do anything that might disturb his young wife, then realized that
his heavy tread would not likely be heard over the howl of the wind and the
sounds of Sara's suffering. He slumped
onto the worn horsehair sofa and stared into the flames rising from the pieces
of oak charring in the fireplace.
Something stirred David--a sound. A sound different from the sounds of the wind
or the cries of Sara. Again. Stronger.
He took out his watch and clicked open the cover. The
flames had done their seductive, hypnotic dance and lulled David's mind for
nearly fifteen minutes--2:12 a.m. Sara was quiet, and the wind seemed to have
lowered its voice.
"Mister Cooper, you got yourself a fine redheaded
boy," Cora announced in a strong voice from the bedroom. "You be
patient now an' you can come see him an' Miz Sara in jes' a few minutes. There
some things I got to do first."
David waited, hardly patient, checking his watch twice in
the long ten minutes before Cora called to him again. "Mister Cooper, you
can come in now."
David adjusted the wick to brighten the glow given off by
the coal oil lamp flickering on the bedside table. "Are you all right,
Sara? How do you feel? I heard...I guess you felt a lot of pain."
"I'm all right. I'm tired and I hurt, but I'm all
right. How does the baby look? There's
nothing wrong with him, is there?"
"He's a big one, isn't he?"
"Yessir, Mister Cooper, he sure nuff is a big
boy.'Bout eight pounds, I'd say. Maybe a bit more," Cora said. Her dark skin and the black cloth coat she wore against
the chill blended into the darkness of the corner near the head of the bed
opposite David. "He sure ain't fussed much. Mos' of the time big boys like
him squall an' carry on like they want the whole world to know they here."
She turned to her patient. "Yessum, Miz Sara, he's fine. He's got two
ears, two eyes, a nose, ten fingers an' ten toes an' everthin' else that
s'posed to stick out on a little boy." Her china white teeth and
glint-of-gold smile seemed to add a touch more light to the room as she tucked
the quilts closer about Sara's shoulders.
Sara looked down at the baby cradled between her breast and
her arm. "Do you want to hold him?" she asked, looking up at her
young husband.
"Can I? I...I think so. I've never held a little bitty
baby before. I don't want to hurt him or anything."
Cora laughed. "Mister Cooper, they don' break easy.
You jus' get your hands under him from one end to the other. Don't want his
head to wobble 'roun' too much. You better get used to holdin' him, cause you
goin' to be a good daddy, an' good daddies, they pick up their kids an' hold
them an' play with them a lot."
David fumbled with the blanket that swaddled his son,
lifted him, and held him close to his body. "You sure are red and
wrinkled," he whispered. He gently bounced the baby in his arms for
several minutes. More comfortable after that short time, he shifted the bundle
and, with a finger, pushed the blanket away from the baby's face.
"He
doesn't have much hair yet," Sara said, "but what he does have looks
like it’s going to red. I think he's going to look just like you."
David leaned closer to the lamp. "Hard to tell in this
light, but I think you're right. Looks kinda red. Poor kid, if he looks like me
he'll have a million freckles and a bunch of nicknames like 'Red', an' 'Freck,'
an' 'Speck.' Lot 's of people won't ever know
his real name."
Sara frowned. "He doesn't have a name, yet. Since he
has red hair like you, do you want to call him David Arnold Cooper,
Junior?"
"No. Every kid I ever knew that was a junior ended up
being called 'Junior' all the time. He needs a name people will
remember." He held the child up at
arms length and studied him for a while. "I want to call him Noble Adrian
Cooper. Adrian
was my granddaddy’s name. I was only eight when he died, but he was really
special to me. Granddaddy said nobody
should ever name a boy Adrian, but if it's his middle name nobody will ever
call him Adrian anyway."
"Was someone in your family called Noble?" Sara
asked.
"Noble was my best friend in school. Noble Strow. He
was big, smart, and strong. I can still remember what he would say if some boys
ever started to tease him about his name. He would tell them that the
dictionary said that noble meant lofty and exalted in character, and grand,
stately, and magnificent in appearance. The way he would stand with his
knuckles on his hip bones and look down at them and smile, those other boys
would be pretty quick to agree that Noble was a good name that suited him just
fine. By the looks of this big boy, Noble should fit him just fine, too."
"Noble Strow," Sara repeated. "I knew the
Strows had a son, but I didn't know he was a friend of yours."
"I 'member when he drown." Cora said.
David laid the baby on the bed beside Sara and pushed the
quilts close around it. He pulled a straight back chair close to the bed, sat
down, and took Sara's hand in his. "The weather was hot and our school
room was even hotter. I talked Noble into skipping and going to Diamond
Springs. There were a couple of other boys at the springs and we decided we
should see who could swim the farthest underwater. When it was Noble's turn he
stayed under a long time. At first we thought he had come up for air in some
bushes or behind a tree. Finally, we decided we should look for him. It took
almost an hour to find him. One of the nigger men that row those boats with the
glass pane in the bottom saw his foot sticking out of the grass."
Sara closed her eyes, touched a hand to her lips, and shook
her head. Then she looked at David, her eyes welled with tears. "I think
Noble Strow would be proud of his namesake."
Noble Adrian Cooper's blue eyes blinked against the dim
light of his new world.
The author, Joseph Richardson, is a native Floridian born and raised on a farm outside a small Florida town quite similar to fictional town of Walako in Fire Angels. Richardson graduated from St. Petersburg , FL High School and earned a B.S.from the University of Alabama . He retired from NASA, Kennedy Space Center after more than thirty-five years government service. “Joe” is an army veteran of the Korean War. He has two grown sons and lives in Titusville , FL with Joan, his wife of fifty-five years, and their five “rescued” pets. He is a member of American MENSA.
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